The Draft Constitution- termed the Harmonized Draft Constitution- has many things that could be improved; the unevenness of the language, the level of detail, the style of drafting and there are specific issues of content that need to be addressed.
The content issues are analyzed in this analysis. However, the key question is not whether one approves fully of the Draft Constitution. It is to remember that the alternative is the status quo. The spirit of this analysis is that there are specific changes that can be incorporated into the existing draft that would help it become a superior alternative to the current Constitution